Fleeting


These are separate haiku.

fleeting, flying low
hunger is nagging, desperate
but the field is dry

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at wee hours, woken
by longing desire, your face
fleeting by, soundless

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these wand’ring thoughts, lost
making transient stops, are you
fleeting or drifting?

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Sensational Haiku Wednesday

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7 thoughts on “Fleeting

    • Thank you, Jenn. I’m happy to be part of your meme this time. It’s been a while since I entered one. Thanks for that feedback. I also loved to hear it, especially one that made me going back to re-read my own haiku and realizing what you were saying. You are right, they do have a sense of urgency. Hah, something for me to ponder.

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