These are separate haiku.

fleeting, flying low
hunger is nagging, desperate
but the field is dry


at wee hours, woken
by longing desire, your face
fleeting by, soundless


these wand’ring thoughts, lost
making transient stops, are you
fleeting or drifting?


Sensational Haiku Wednesday


7 thoughts on “Fleeting

    • Thank you, Jenn. I’m happy to be part of your meme this time. It’s been a while since I entered one. Thanks for that feedback. I also loved to hear it, especially one that made me going back to re-read my own haiku and realizing what you were saying. You are right, they do have a sense of urgency. Hah, something for me to ponder.

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