Haiku on Review

a life being reviewed
a pause, steps retraced, and then
brace the wind forward


this path behind me
rained, stormed, sunned by life’s lessons
my backpack’s heavy


a lost love reviewed
tears that no champagne can stop
but party on, love


don’t like what you see?
adjust your view or your seat
this object is fixed


last year in 30s
waiting for the curtain fall
stage is near empty



Sensational Haiku Wednesday, Prompt: Review

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11 thoughts on “Haiku on Review

  1. `this object is fixed` – I love that! I feel the same way – people can adjust to me, because I`m fixed too πŸ˜‰ (or maybe I need to be fixed – either way, it`s not going to happen!) Thanks for joining us this year for Sensational Haiku Wednesday – it`s great to have you with us!

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