Credit to KirbyTails@DeViantArt
a porcelain she’s
molded to be, but a bright lamp she
evolves into, giving lights
I chose to ignore the 5-7-5 rule here in order to follow the message of this poem. I think it is more beautiful this way than when I tried to fit the words into the restricted style.
This post is part of Haiku Heights Prompt #46: Porcelain. Please click the picture below to see more wonderful haikus written by others.
Lost and Found, A Continuous Journey 
Lovely I feel sentiment outweighs mechanics
You got that right. I stopped fighting the mechanics. Plus my fingers got tired of counting 🙂 Thank you.
this is lovely.
moreover the 5-7-5 was based on japanese language 🙂
You’re right, magiceye. 🙂 Thank you for stopping by and commenting.
brilliant one.
😉
Thank you, Jingle.